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The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist

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My second Mary-Sue series revolving around specific complaints most people would declare as Mary-Sueish or considered as bad writing, which I don't agree with.  This series includes:

Writing solely in second person
Using cliches or writing self-inserts
Plot revolving around getting sucked into an alternative universe
OCs paired up Canon characters
OCs being related to Canon characters
Powers of controlling all of the elements, a sudden surge of powers, and having or gaining wings
Having a character come back to life, having musical talents, numerous hobbies, and knowing various languages
Stories containing elderly characters that appear youthful
Stories containing only "hot" characters
Characters with multi-colored hair
Characters with a lack of scars on a fighter
The "sudden" surge of Japanese characters in stories
Princesses vs Rebellious tomboy girls and girlish boys and macho girls
Characters that cut, are into drugs or alcohol
Characters with mental and emotional disorders, diseases, disabilities
Characters whose bodies or souls are inhabited by other beings such as angels or demons
Characters who use sex as an outlet
The symptoms of lust
Rule-breaking genresAll Rights Reserved

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Multifandom Agere Oneshots by PrpleBuniFagg

THERE IS NOT ENOUGH AGE REGRESSION FANFICTION!!! so I'm making one :33 anyways y'all- LET THE FLUFF ENSUE!! (and mild angst) PLEASE REQUESTT- Request status: OPEN Fandoms I'll do: -Murder drones -TADC -one piece -MHA -demon slayer -TBHK -Gorillaz -the promised neverland -Pokémon -TMNT (rise, mm and 2012 only!!) -Hazbin hotel + Helluvaboss -harry potter -Arcane -how to train your dragon -miraculous ladybug GRRRR- I LOVE WRITING AGERE!!!!

Never Be (Percabeth AU)✔️ by bellaschneeb

. ~•~ . We'll never be as young as we are now It's time to leave this old black and white town Let's seize the day Let's run away Don't let the colors fade to grey We'll never be as young as we are now. ~•~ Annabeth Chase is headstrong and impulsive. She always fights for what she believes is right. Percy Jackson has always been an outcast. He's the quiet, brooding kid in the back of the class. These two are at each other's throats half the time. But what happens when they open up? Will they fit their broken pieces together? Or will they burry them deeper, pushing each other away? DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the PJO or HOO characters. They all belong to Rick Riordan. This is a Percabeth Alternate Universe, meaning they ARE NOT DEMIGODS. Also I do not own this cover picture, all rights go to the owner. Yeah. I also do not own any songs mentioned in this book unless I say otherwise. WARNING: this story contains strong language and mature content. It also contains mentions of bullying and abuse. None are meant to offend anyone. Theme song: Never Be by 5 Seconds of Summer FINISHED: 12/3/18

bakudeku {18+ shots} by cheshirepretty

Hello everyone! This is a BKDK book (God please forgive me) I am a female writer!!! PLEASE ENJOY AND READ BELOW!! love you! 4-16-23 : 10.3k reads! Omfg i love y'all and I hope you guys keep reading and stay tune you hornsters😽(2025 me; oh my god i'm in tears why would i write that.) 4-19-23: 11.8k...omg I love everything single one of you 3-1-25: I'm fully back with motivation! ---------------------------- Book includes (UPDATED VERSION): -My au (Alternative Universe) (both main characters age ranges 21+ when nsfw chapters but age may change throughout other topics or story plots. I may bring up random oc's) -Random story plots (mafia, school, hero's but these includes a bunch of mha charecters!) -LGBTQIA+ - 18+ NSFW content (smut/heavy smut) -Explicit language - Heavy topics related to: suicide, sh, abuse, use of drugs + alcohol mentions) ****most likely on story plot chapters If you are uncomfortable with these inclusions, i suggest you to read the softer chapters that mention "fluff" next to the story title -------------------------- ⚠️THESE CHARACTERS DO NOT BELONG TO ME⚠️ ⚠️IF YOU ARE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH THESE INCLUSIONS, I SUGGEST YOU NOT TO READ OR READ THE SOFTER CHAPTERS THAT HAS "fluff" NEXT TO THE TITLE⚠️ ---------------------------- published: 03/18/22 comeback: 03/01/25 ------------------------------ Thank you -pretty (Also did you eat or drink water today?? If not GO DO IT!!! you need to stay energized <333)

Ototuo! Shota Accel! by BodyPillow4Life

I was bad at summaries, and i still am. But anyways, what if, instead of an overly grumpy 15 y/o Accel, we got an 11y/o one instead? An 11 years old Accel is a complete new Accel! How much of the timeline will change? What kind of problems will they face? And what kind of bullshittery that they must overcome? Then read bruh! Disclaimer! How many is too many baddie words? I dunno, imma see how much i can fit in there. Gory scenes and details included! Credits are due to where they belong! I don't own anything other than the stuff I've written. Characters, arts, memes, and etc belongs to their rightful owners.

Bring It On, Valdez (Leo Valdez x Reader) by Glitchy-chan

THIS IS AN AU GUYS Leo x Reader ey this story is kinda shit but you guys seem to like it so iM PROUD OF IT just a really long thing I came up with through middle school and apparently it's kind of popular woAh, thanks for reading! Key: (Y/N)- your name (H/C)- hair color (H/L)- hair length (E/C)- eye color (S/T)- skin tone I don't own PJO or you, Rick Riordan owns PJO, and you own you :D But I own the story line. It's miiine. No stealing. THIS IS AN AU SO NOT ALL FACTS WILL BE ACCURATE All rights reserved.

Losing Hope *Leo's Memory Fic* (Discontinued) by MajesticallyMajestic

I changed the story cover. Some of the words got cut off and I feel too lazy to fix it so it's staying like that Think of the worst childhood ever. Got that in your head? Great! Now multiply that childhood by 10, add in Greek Gods into the equation...aaannnd BOOM! You got yourself Leo Valdez as a result! It was just another regular day, well as regular as it can get for the demigods. Leo Valdez was working on a project when Hera (Surprise surprise!) payed him a little vist. Due to past events involving Leo begging Hera for a favor, Leo now has to return the favor. What will Leo do when this favor involves him, and how will the rest of the Seven plus Nico will react? Secrets will be revealed, fandoms are deeply appreciated, and tears will definitely be shed. A/N: Yeah, okay so the cover is crap. I really didn't feel like re-downloading the Wattpad app to make the covers. Also I'm not done reading the books. Hehe...yeah. Slow updates since I'm typing this on my phone!! I hope you enjoy this Fan Fiction!! -MajesticallyMajestic

Fallen in the rain. LUMITY au by nahreallykendall123

This is kinda like a beastStar au but if you're a predator or a strong animal you get more recognition than the weaker ones. This has kingdoms so all the coven equals one kingdom and in the story there is a new one as a main rebellion group, or a corp of justice called the titan heart kingdom who job is to make sure everything in check. So now they're currently against the emperor. illusion plants and Beast kingdoms are secretly allies with them. Also the age of an adult is 16, but the time you can drink and vote is 18 so technically having sex at sixteen is not teen pregnancy and in fact is quite normal. Depending on where you come from depends how many people just don't support it. Luz noceda is a swift fighter, good in far and close combat due to speed and accuracy though she is considered weak due to being in the deer familia. Although she is a gazelle . She believes in her kingdom ( titan heart) yet she wanted to make sure in her conquest to stop the emperor she fighting was for is the right thing. She was venturing completely lost when she saw a gorgeous leopard who might've just stolen her heart, no matter how cold the feline seems. Amity blight a well known royal in the abomination and emperor kingdom lost meaning in life and practically became a working machine. She was skilled with magic and close combat best. Being mediocre in long range. Though her strength is unmatched she faces a large problem as she fallen into a cliché of falling in love in the rain. Worst of all a deer. BTW MAKE WARN OF 🚨⚠️ THERE IS SUICIDE, SEX,DEATH,MENTAL HEALTH ISSUES( like sever depression maybe suicidal thoughts) AND A LOT OF TEA SO BE WARN NOW 🚨⚠️

Haikyuu Scenarios by s1r3nscr3am1ng

Some Haikyuu one shots. There are mostly x readers, but when the mood strikes I'll make an x OC. The posting is going to be super fucking slow, but it'll happen eventually, lol. For many of the one shots, I have feminine pronouns. As of me making this change, I will change it to gender neutral. I have some prewritten, so the next few I post will also be feminine pronouns. Also, a lot of characters may differ from the show. I apologise for that and I try to keep them as close as possible, but it doesn't always work out that way. I hope you understand and can look past my mistakes in their character. WARNING: This book does have many mature themes, one of which being abuse in later stories. In those chapters I will always put a notice before the story starts and before and after these parts so those who may be triggered by these themes can skip them. I may not put notice before just mentions of it tho, so read with caution when there's a TW on any of the chapters.

She's So Nice by chataOdulce

"As she walks up to the steps of this godforsaken place she checks her phone. "Oh shit am I really that early..." "Curse me and my impeccable time management *SIGHH*" Turning back to her phone, she texts her friends to ask if they're here yet. Her fingers type rapidly as she continues walking towards school. As she is about to send her perfectly thought-out text including three very unnecessary emojis, she is roughly shoved passed by an unfamiliar individual. "Oh hell no...we are not starting off the year like this"" ///////// In Which a girl trudges through life dealing with many misfortunes and colorful characters //////// Bro imagine writing an OC insert fanfiction about a series from your childhood ahahaha- This both fulfills my childhood urge to write about Mystreet and my now urge to fix the weird concepts in said series. (Cross posted on AO3)

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