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The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist

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My second Mary-Sue series revolving around specific complaints most people would declare as Mary-Sueish or considered as bad writing, which I don't agree with.  This series includes:

Writing solely in second person
Using cliches or writing self-inserts
Plot revolving around getting sucked into an alternative universe
OCs paired up Canon characters
OCs being related to Canon characters
Powers of controlling all of the elements, a sudden surge of powers, and having or gaining wings
Having a character come back to life, having musical talents, numerous hobbies, and knowing various languages
Stories containing elderly characters that appear youthful
Stories containing only "hot" characters
Characters with multi-colored hair
Characters with a lack of scars on a fighter
The "sudden" surge of Japanese characters in stories
Princesses vs Rebellious tomboy girls and girlish boys and macho girls
Characters that cut, are into drugs or alcohol
Characters with mental and emotional disorders, diseases, disabilities
Characters whose bodies or souls are inhabited by other beings such as angels or demons
Characters who use sex as an outlet
The symptoms of lust
Rule-breaking genresAll Rights Reserved

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Elders of the creek oneshots by Mothklok

One shots written about Barry, David, and mark. Typically x readers, maybe oc's or self inserts if requested. Yadda yadda not my characters yadda yadda you guys know the drill. Not writing morally wrong shit (r@pe, pedophilia, incest, etc) There is cussing, mentions of mental health issues and mental illness, and smut in this book. (occasionally used to write smut, but not now that I'm almost 19 (started this at 16) and I'm not sure if the boys are canonically 18 or if it's just fannon) Smut, fluff, angst -des Dm me for requests :) Started july 27th, 2022

$☽︎//ᐯIՏᑌᗩᒪ ᑎOᐯᗴᒪ OᑎᗴՏᕼOTՏ\\☾︎ by SanyaYao$

So here's a book of visual novel one shots mostly about my ocs. I'm not that good at x reader but I'll do some under requests. so we have: Smut Fluff Angst and occasionally Incorrect Quotes

Demigods x Reader Oneshots (no longer updating) by TheOneWithoutALife

A few notes before we get started. -I am no longer taking requests. This is a completed work. -I will do thinks like Demigod x Child!Reader (THESE ONES ARE NOT SHIPS!!! THESE ONES ARE PURELY WHOLESOMENESS AND CUTE. PLEASE DO NOT SEXUALIZE THESE AS SHIPS) and AUs. -There may be minor and major swears. -I use the she/her pronouns in this book because they are the ones I prefer, and I believe most of my target audience does as well. If you prefer other pronouns, just swap them with the ones you prefer. -These are oneshots, meaning I don't edit them. I try to just let my brain go *splurg* And I don't usually edit them. -Cross posted on Ao3 under the same username with a tiny bit of editing I do not own any of the characters!!! All rights go to Rick Riordan, creator of the PJO/HOO series.

Fake Feelings: Banana Bus Squad by yippeekyay

Banana bus squad fanfic Ships include: Terrorsnuckle Minicat Daithidecalibre Ohmtoonz H2Ovanoss BasicallyIDoScotty Warnings Assault, weapons, fluffy content, mentions of rape, cutting, and plot twists. (Edit: major character death) PLEASE IF YOU GET BAD FEELINGS ABOUT ANY OF THESE THINGS BE CAUTIOUS. Summary: "I'd do anything for you Ohm." "I know Toonzy." "I'll love you till the day my machinery breaks down." "I know Brian." "Fuck you." "Love you too Tyler." "I'll never be able to live if your not by my side." "I love you Vanoss." "DAIVD YOU BROUGHT ME GUMMY BEARS." "Hell, that's true love right there." "I'm sorry I'm an idiot." "Your my idiot Marcel." ----- Everyone has powers. Wether you can see them or not. Inside every normal human is something...extravagant. While it may not be as powerful as those who's powers are seen, Love can conquer all enemies. Things can be hidden from loves true eyes, and tragedy can strike at the worst times.

Bard's Cousin by TwentyOneBlackSirens

Okay so basically I didn't finish editing but you can read and cringe at your own free will. There is a gap though. ELEMENTS OF THE STORY -A name - military flunky -criss cross dressing -sexually confused midget -LEGIT ERRORS -bs excuses -pointless rant -missing scenes -more loose holes than a whore -a fucking crossover bc younger me tried to be cool ((what a bitch)) -new damn character in the last chapter bc I was tired of this shit after the 5th chapter ^^elements of this story Under editing btw

Never Be (Percabeth AU)✔️ by bellaschneeb

. ~•~ . We'll never be as young as we are now It's time to leave this old black and white town Let's seize the day Let's run away Don't let the colors fade to grey We'll never be as young as we are now. ~•~ Annabeth Chase is headstrong and impulsive. She always fights for what she believes is right. Percy Jackson has always been an outcast. He's the quiet, brooding kid in the back of the class. These two are at each other's throats half the time. But what happens when they open up? Will they fit their broken pieces together? Or will they burry them deeper, pushing each other away? DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the PJO or HOO characters. They all belong to Rick Riordan. This is a Percabeth Alternate Universe, meaning they ARE NOT DEMIGODS. Also I do not own this cover picture, all rights go to the owner. Yeah. I also do not own any songs mentioned in this book unless I say otherwise. WARNING: this story contains strong language and mature content. It also contains mentions of bullying and abuse. None are meant to offend anyone. Theme song: Never Be by 5 Seconds of Summer FINISHED: 12/3/18

Demigodly Torture: Percy Jackson Truth or Dare [COMPLETED] by BeyondInsanity_

Look, I didn't want to play Truth or Dare. It gets you humiliated in embarrassing, awkward ways. Like kissing a god or having a female-Ariel look. And some really cringe-worthy stuff. So, if you are REALLY interested in my tale, open this book and read it, I DARE YOU. This is the old and immature book, the mature and professional with my improved writing skills is called the same thing, but has 'REWRITTEN' on it. This is BOOK 1 in the trilogy, of which I still need a name for. PJO TRILOGY: BK1: Demigodly Torture BK2: Percy Jackson: Insanity, Stuff and More Insanity BK3: ??? There is a request column at the end if this book where you can request truths or dares for a person. More info at that chapter! CHECK THE CHAPTER NUMBERS BEFORE READING AS IT IS JUMBLED UP. I would like to thank: @ WrittenInMyDarkHeart for her review! AND @Crazy_fangirl_101 for the totally AmaZHANG cover! [COMPLETED] [EDITED COMPLETED] WARNING: VERY IMMATURE CONTENT. READ ONLY IF YOU WANT TO LAUGH AND APPRECIATE HUMOR. DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN ANY CHARACTERS. ALL RIGHTS TO RICK RIORDAN. First published: 3 May, 2014 Last updated: 11 January, 2016 This story was written two freaking years ago, so it could be slightly childish... Wow, this is one long description. Also, the inspiration for this story goes to @PurpleCat02. :P, if you are reading this, Kat ;)

One Step Ahead part I | Sirius Black by cantbelievethis420

Sirius snaps, barking out irritably, "Because shes a creature that turns men into blithering fools." Her voice is even when she asks, "Speaking from personal experience, Black?" ********************************************************* Gwenyth Whitlock knew what being a Veela was like at Hogwarts, but now that she looked like one she was wholly unprepared. The only person more shocked by her appearance was Sirius Black. The Marauders had spent years trying to successfully prank the Ravenclaw girl, but when she comes back to school transformed and Sirius finally gets a reaction out of her, he finds his priorities shifting. ~In which Gwen and Sirius decide that perhaps they do have somethings in common~ #1 Remus Lupin 3/23/2021 #1 Hogwarts 3/26/2021 #1 Marauders 3/30/2021 #1 James Potter 3/30/2021 #1 Dumbledore 3/31/2021 #1 Harry Potter 4/3/2021 #1 Sirius Black 4/6/2021 {{This is my second ever story-and it's a long one!! Wattpad caps at 200 chapters...so be sure to check out and add part two of one step ahead! I promise it's worth it!}} MATURE.

My Bad Boy Doctor by Kaiddance

WATTYS 2022 SHORTLIST EDITOR'S CHOICE -- SEPTEMBER 2021 EXCLUSIVE CHAPTERS AND WRITER'S REVEAL CONTENT AVAILABLE - NOT A PAID STORY Appearances can be deceiving. What if the Bad Boy wasn't so bad and the good girl wasn't quite so good? Kelly Wankum has an unfortunate last name and even worse luck. By the tender age of twenty-three, she's broken her tailbone, thumb, her nose, hip, and now her rib. It wouldn't be so bad if she could say something funny like, "I broke myself on a stripper pole" or "I was mugged in a Walmart parking lot." That would actually be believable, right? Instead, she breaks her rib reaching for a ball of yarn. Even worse, everyone knows she's so accident prone, she could sneeze and lose a tooth. They'd probably bet on her swallowing it in a pancake. Oh wait, she's done that too. Another trip to the Urgent Care has the doctors shaking their heads, offering to pray for her health while new, sexy Doctor Blake Cole immediately gets off on the wrong foot. Months after their first encounter, Blake and Kelly meet again by chance. After inadvertantly humiliating her, Blake tries to set things straight and make it up to her. The problem is, Blake's lifestyle is painfully different, and Kelly can't help imagining him like every bad boy she's ever read about online. Can Blake convince her to give him a chance and prove he's actually a good guy? **This story is set in the present and the pandemic is part of the narrative.** --Cover by AnnieRosebud-- ©2020, 2022

Andy Jackson: Child of Land & Sea by dfcrosa

This is a #Genderbend retelling of the Percy Jackson series I made years ago on fanfiction.net. I was asked by a few followers to post it here since I no longer use that website. So here it is. This is the story of Andy Jackson, daughter of Poseidon, and her adventures in the world create by Rick Riordan. #PJO Retell. #Fem!Percy. #Male!Annabeth I also don't own the disney songs that inspired me to write this in the first place. So if you see something you think it's familiar, you're probably right. I'm just borrowing it. All credits granted. In fact, I don't own anything. This is just to add a bit of fun to a story we all love so much. And here's the fancast: <https://dumbledearme.tumblr.com/post/179110267411/read-child-of-land-and-sea-here-read-world-of-sea>. Warning: mild coarse language.

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Demigods x Reader Oneshots (no longer updating) cover

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Elders of the creek oneshots

One shots written about Barry, David, and mark. Typically x readers, maybe oc's or self inserts if requested. Yadda yadda not my characters yadda yadda you guys know the drill. Not writing morally wrong shit (r@pe, pedophilia, incest, etc) There is cussing, mentions of mental health issues and mental illness, and smut in this book. (occasionally used to write smut, but not now that I'm almost 19 (started this at 16) and I'm not sure if the boys are canonically 18 or if it's just fannon) Smut, fluff, angst -des Dm me for requests :) Started july 27th, 2022