Mary Sue Test
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Last published Wed, Nov 23, 2016
Send in your OC's and I will evaluate them based on their looks, personality, backstory and various other relevant things to decide wether or not your OC is a Mary Sue as well as giving you a few pointers on how to improve it.
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