Azri's Story Draft

Azri's story is my first ever book that i have ever written, and you guys might hate it. a lot of people say that i sell myself short...you make the decision. see if i'm a good author or not, and tell me too! if you hate my story comment why and what i should do to fix it, i need feedback to get better. and if you love it, comment that too, i need to know these things! i might send the story to an editor and publisher, but if everyone hates my story i wont. i need it to be professional if i send the book to them so i can be an actual, published author! so comment!