Ghetto Samurai

Ghetto Samurai

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Parts 5

Ongoing2h 23m

Last published Sat, Feb 6, 2016

adventure romance

This is the first draft copy of the story I've been working on for some time would like some feed back and comments about what I should alter and change.

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