Hello, Goodbye

There's a couple of changes I'm currently working on to try and make the storyline and plot of this story better! 2 years ago I was still young and it was one of those times where I look back at what I wrote and CRINGE! I'll try my best to revamp a few of my chapters so that it won't feel too much of an "amateur" work. I want this story to be as professional as other writers.