"Hello Mr. Freedom"
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Last published Sun, Sep 18, 2016
Acknowledging me in his office the chief says "Your the transfer from California. Correct?"
"Yes, that's right." I respond
"Do you have any outside experience?" he ask.
"No sir." I respond.
"Well good luck cause I'm not here to teach yah" The chief waved his hand signaling me to leave. Is that really it?
What the hell is that supposed to mean?!
Detective Freedom is new to his new station in Florida and pulled into a serious case. Finally, caught the notorious" Lady Zay" is in custody of St. Petersburg station. Many say that she is only there because she wants to be there. Could this be part of her plan? Can detective Freedom stop her? Read it and find out!
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