Broken Promises

Broken Promises

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A young girl named Alex Makay has been abused by her mother almost every day since she was six when her dad left. But every thing changes the day after her 17th birthday. Her mother leaves with her new boyfriend Rob leaving Alex behind only days after she promised Alex that she would never leave. One day all her anger, pain and rage finally get the better of her. She goes after her mother to make her pay for breaking her promise. Alex wants to keep feeling the way she did when she killed her mother, but doesn't want to get caught. One day she finds a note stuck to her cupboard with a scalpel telling her to go to the park that night at 12:00. There she will meet an older boy in a blue mask named EyelessJack that tries to convince her to join him and his 'family' so she can keep feeling the way she did with very little chance of getting caught. There's something strangely familiar about him that she can't quite put her finger on.
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*Not edited, I'm doing this on my phone. I do not own any of the Creepypasta, I own the following characters: Emily, Micah, Tyler, Cole, Dylan & The Parents. I simply made this out of boredom and for entertainment purposes. Please, enjoy.* Emily was a young girl who lived in a house in the middle of the woods. She would go outside and play with her imagery friend, Jack. She would explore the woods with him, he would tell her to kill the bugs, throw rocks at the birds. Influencing her to kill everything without caring or feeling guilt. Her parents hated it, as did her older brother. He always told a story about her friend, Jack. After she stopped going outside, she began to ignore her friend, Jack. But He still came. Her family moves to North Carolina to get away from what Emily was encountering. "Who's there?" She calls, hoping nothing replies back. "You're back, Emily. I've missed you." A voice rose from the darkness, with footsteps inching closer.

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