Flame ( Formally 'Fire Proof' )

Flame ( Formally 'Fire Proof' )

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This is the story of a teenage girl's kindapping. How she got out of it alive. And how she became his little game..or his candle. "I felt as if i was being watched as soon as i stepped outside the door to the hallway. Then i saw him. His cold eyes met mine and it sent a shudder down my spine. All of the sudden i find myself being engulfed by a pair of arms, and something has been put over my mouth. Duct tape. I tried screaming, i tried. I couldn't do anything but squirm in those arms. I was drug backwards into a dark room. I heard a door click. And suddenly the room is filled with the smell of..a match? I see a small flame move towards me and all i can do is watch it come closer and close untill it touches my skin,burning me."
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The "Please..." I hear her whimper and I go into full panic mode. "Calm down, okay? Deep breaths. Don't hang up. I'll be with you soon. Where are you?" I rush as I grab the car key sitting on the glass table. I run into the garage with my dad behind me. "What do you need?" Dad asks "A room. A big one." He runs back inside as I hear her voice again. "Basement...blood...Elle..." I hear sounds of movement in the background and connect the dots. Elle's bleeding, or something... "Deep breaths baby, deep breaths. It's okay, you're okay" I murmur reassuring words to her, thankful that there's no traffic. Several thoughts run through my mind as I drove to her house. The last time we spoke, she could barely stand me, but now she's calling me. I feel kinda used, but now's not the time to think about that. I reach her house in a matter of minutes and shove the door open. The house is quiet, save for my heavy breathing and footsteps. I reach the basement and take in the sight in front of me. Blair cradles her brutally beaten-up sister in her lap as she rocks herself back and forth blinking very frequently. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Currently being edited Look out for cringe worthy typos and plot loopholes

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