Breathless *No Longer Being Continued*
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Ongoing1h 32m
Last published Sat, Aug 11, 2012
Sutton Aspen has never been normal, despite her hard efforts. She just wanted to have a boyfriend and live her life. But her abusive father and absent mother take away from her normal life as she is sent to live with her mother's old friend from high school. Turns out, she isn't the only one who isn't normal.
I am no longer updating this story. Too many character flaws and plot holes. I apologize and I'm only keeping it up because of the views it's gotten.
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