The Whisper Wall
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MatureOngoing16m
Last published Mon, May 28, 2018
Six Victims:
Grae - Abandoned Disappointment
Blake- Wrongly Accused Son
Christopher - Rich Worry wart
Murcury - Overglorified (secret) Druggy
Evelina - Self concious bulimic
Wallace - Heartbroken Loner
Mathias- Mysterious Runaway
One Secret
Six teens, all seventeen years of age have dysfunctional lives. Some are are stressed, some are depressed, and others were framed or blamed. When society, their families, and friends have given up on them they find themselves at the Whisper Wall.
Tell it a secret, and two choices appear.
Choice One: Testing
Each secret = one test. Passing the tests = a problem in the old life is wiped clean. One can decide to keep the fixed problems, and return to life as normal. Or one can risk it, and continue to take more and more tests until their life is rid of any regrets, issues, etc. However, if a test is failed...a painful punishment is received.
Choice Two: Life
Instead of testing, one can choose to go back to normal life...except they must give up something they truly love.
Choose wisely.
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