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Rose Gold (A Twist on Fifty Shades of Grey)

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Reads 782
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Parts 8
Time 55m

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Lucy Aquino is a renowned author, already well known at the young age of twenty-three for her many award winning novels.  An eccentric and particular woman, she is nothing less than abnormal with her strange set of standards to her odd relationships with the people around her. But she has many dark and twisted secrets, one being an odd fetish she's gone a long time without having fulfilled. Lucy is a Little, in need of being coddled like she were helpless to putting her entire trust in a dominant, including her pleasure. 

Enter Christian Grey.

After a falling out between him and Ms. Anastasia Steele, Christian finds himself more than intrigued with the short vixen, with her sharp words and strong disposition. But while his infatuation grows, Lucy goes to great lengths to set him straight on the difference between being a proper Dom and an abusive masochist. In the process, Mr. Grey comes to find out he isn't the only one with a shady and dark past.

(In my own opinion, after reading Fifty Shades, I immediately wanted to set the fictional man straight. The relationship demonstrated in the series between Ana and him is not only an abusive one, but also unrealistic and sick. I want to show an audience that there is such a thing as a healthy Dom/Sub relationship and make sure no one will be fooled by the emotional terrorist that Christian in the original series is. All Rights go to the original author of the Fifty Shades series. The same rights go to the original artist who made the unedited version of the cover, all rights go to them.)All Rights Reserved

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Neighbors, Strangers Or? by CathyJensen

I am using E L James Fifty Shades Characters. In my story I have Ana as a very suspicious youngster. She likes to play detective and loves Harriet the spy books along with any detective books. She has moved in the home between the Greys and The Lincoln's. Her adoptive father is ex CIA, FBI, Secret Service. He has taught her to trust her gut about vibes people put out. Ray Steele adopted Anastasia Rose after her parents were killed in a bombing of their car. She was being babysat by friends. Ray was left Ana to raise per her parents will. Her parents met in black ops assignment. They had no family and only trusted Ray Steele with her care. She was six months old when he had to retire and create a home for her. After creating a new life and a new name for them both he moved to Bellevue Washington. He hired a well known caretaker from a list from an agency who handled special assignments. Meaning they could unarm an assassins and protect a child as well. He hired three of them. He had safe rooms built in his homes and made sure they were childproofed and would keep a child entertained. Most people never questioned the interior dimensions compared to the outside.

Special Delivery by CathyJensen

E L James gets credit for the characters names, but the idea is partly due to my weird imagination. Christian Grey is of course a billionaire, single and not looking for a wife. Anastasia Steele has been given no choice but to get married by her very insistent family. Her inheritance is at stake. So she creates a fake name and places and ad on line for a husband. Elliott Grey spots this ad and decides to answer it using a fake name as well. But he describes himself as Christian Grey his brother. He brings in Mia and his new wife in in the setup. He had Barney Christians IT expert trace the ad and find out who the person actually is and finds out the whole story. He decides with his three cohorts this young lady is the right person to get Christian to the alter. Carrick and Grace Grey are worried that Christian will not ever marry. He has had his share of women, but they all want the wedding and he is tiring of all the attention he gets from women who have one goal in mind a ring on his finger showing he is off the market.

The Competition by CathyJensen

E L James owns almost all the Characters in this story. Love the FSOG characters and I enjoy using them in homage to E L James and her amazing stories using these characters, Anastasia Rose Steele and Katherine Agnes Kavanagh seemed to like to compete against each other in everything including landing boyfriends. They had the looks and the money to attract the kind of boys their parents approved and disapproved of. Raymond and Carla hated that the girls were so competitive in everything. Up until now it wasn't a huge issue. It started when Eamon and Enid Kavanagh had a little race to see which of the girls walked first and bet on it. That was when they were toddling. They were born two weeks apart from each other and had dr Grey as their pediatrician. Enid and Carla met each other at one of the well baby appointments and hit it off. They enjoyed the same socio economic group and knew a lot of the same people. Other than being very competitive with one another they got along very well. Dr Grace Grey had a baby daughter the same age as Kate Kavanagh and Ana Steele. So Mia Grey became close friends with the other girls. Mia had two older brothers Elliott 8 and Christian 6. Mia was a month younger than Kate and Ana was two weeks older than Mia. All were able to start school at the same time. Their parents all enrolled them in the same academy. Seattle Progressive Academic Arts grades K -8. Now everything would have been fine except others had heard of how competitive Kate and Ana were tested just how far they would go to win against each other. But the competition started growing and drew others into it. Of course not all the competitive games were known by their parents or the parents of the other parents.

Death Of Innocence by CathyJensen

Each of us have a pivotal moment in our lives which can change us for good or bad. Some have a lot of those. I am for sure mine were many. But alas I am using E L James characters again for this story. Ana Steele is and has been very religious. She has chosen to become a Nun. She goes where she is sent no matter what. Things happen that change her forever. Christian Grey and Elliott Grey are playboys who made money easily and find it easy to attract women whee ever they go. Mia Grey is their baby sister who has no real direction except marrying well and having children. Even though her mother is an example you can become something more than a trophy wife, she can't get through to her. Mias friends aspire to marry her billionaire playboy brothers. So they have no real ambitions of their own. Mia is going to have a very rude awakening in this story. Even though this alludes to mature materiel, I will not become graphic in details. Thanks for reading

FIFTY SHADES OF GREY by lucy1138

This is my own twist on one of my favorite book series 'Fifty Shades Of Grey'. There will be three installments. In my version Christian Grey childhood and back ground is mostly the same. I will be giving more detail of it through out the story through his nightmares. His life doesn't really begin to change until he meets Anastasia Steele. Anastasia is an African American college graduating student living with her roommate Kate. She has a loving relationship with the only man she has known as her father Ray Steele. Her and her mom Carla are not as close due to some unresolved issues of Ana feeling discarded when she pick a man over her. Ana and Christian meet the same way as in the official book but what how would the story change if Ana didn't just consider the contract but actually signed it. She puts in her do's and don'ts and follows the rules. How would things change if it was not just Ana catching strong feels but Christian as well. How different would things be if it was him that was breaking all the rules from the start. He still punishes her but it is because he feels she is cheating on him. Will the punishment be to much for her to take? Or will she take it and stay with him in the end? All these questions and so much more will be answered in this book ALL CHARACTERS OF THIS STORY ARE NOT OF MY OWN THEY BELONG TO THE AMAZING WRITER EL JAMES COMPLETED 3/11/2020 JUST WENT THROUGH RE-EDITING AND ADDED A LITTLE MORE TO SOME CHAPTERS THAT I FELT WAS MISSING SOMETHING. 9/11/21

It's In The Water by CathyJensen

Thanks to E L James for your Fifty Shades Of Grey Trilogy and it's characters. In this version I want to have Christian and Anastasia have no family at all. They were brilliant from birth. Foster parents didn't know how to handle kids with genius IQ's so they were constantly being moved around. They became emancipated as soon as they could. They got the high school diplomas early and earned money and saved every dime they could. Christian Grey 21 Anastasia Steele 18 Eamon Kavanagh 45 Enid Kavanagh 45 Ethan Kavanagh 21 Kate Kavanagh 18 Jason Taylor 32 Gail Taylor 28 Sophia Taylor 6 Andrew Taylor 4 Roz Bailey 20 Gwen Bailey 20 Hector Bailey 1 Thomas Sawyer 24 Roger Swan 26 Evan Swan 26 Christmas Swan 18 Dr Shawn Flynn 27 Sandra Flores 21 Flynn's slutty girlfriend Debra Flynn ex wife 25 Conner Flynn 6 David Flynn 4 Cora Flynn 2 Carrick Sullivan 41 Grace Sullivan 40 Elliott Sullivan 23 Mia Sullivan 18 Every time Christian looks around his office pregnant women keep popping up. He thinks the water fountain they gossip around might have something to do with it lol. Roz finally got him to put a day care center in on the first floor. Anastasia is working hard to get her college degree and is close to getting it. One month more. She is working as a chef at a place called the Mile High Club as a chef. We just got news that the place might be sold to some young hotshot billionaire and there will be changes made. Mia is frantic because she needs this job to get into culinary school. So her nerves are getting the better of her. Anastasia tells her to calm down because nothing is set in stone and she has been given job offers all over Washington State. Things don't go smoothly in the transition of the restaurant. Anastasia leads a walk out which leaves a sour taste in the new buyers mouth.

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Neighbors, Strangers Or?

I am using E L James Fifty Shades Characters. In my story I have Ana as a very suspicious youngster. She likes to play detective and loves Harriet the spy books along with any detective books. She has moved in the home between the Greys and The Lincoln's. Her adoptive father is ex CIA, FBI, Secret Service. He has taught her to trust her gut about vibes people put out. Ray Steele adopted Anastasia Rose after her parents were killed in a bombing of their car. She was being babysat by friends. Ray was left Ana to raise per her parents will. Her parents met in black ops assignment. They had no family and only trusted Ray Steele with her care. She was six months old when he had to retire and create a home for her. After creating a new life and a new name for them both he moved to Bellevue Washington. He hired a well known caretaker from a list from an agency who handled special assignments. Meaning they could unarm an assassins and protect a child as well. He hired three of them. He had safe rooms built in his homes and made sure they were childproofed and would keep a child entertained. Most people never questioned the interior dimensions compared to the outside.