Am I Perfect Yet?

Am I Perfect Yet?

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Whitney came to the top of the stairs while we were all at the bottom, and to say that everyone was shocked was an understatement. Her long red flowing hair that I used to love so much was now blond like her cousins, her grey-green eyes were now covered with blue contacts, and her usual tee-shirt and shorts was replaced with a formal pink dress that stopped right at her knees. "Am I perfect yet mother?" Whitney asked with an emotionless face,and sounding monotone. "No, not yet.'' Her mother replied. ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ Meet Whitney. Long, wavy, red hair, grey-green eyes, skinny with all the right curves could be a supermodel but isn't(because her parents say she isn't good enough), has freckles that run from one cheek, over the bridge of her nose, and onto the other cheek. Also has a boyfriend, who isn't exactly drowning in money, works two jobs to help his mom, but loves her, and everything she does. Doesn't play sports, but does play guitar. And has Cs and above in her classes. Now meet Whitney's cousin, Natalie. Long, wavy, blond hair, blue eyes, a supermodel ( literally), and has porcelain skin. Her boyfriend is the son of the richest people in the next city over( like 3 miles away), hasn't worked a day in his life, and acts like he loves her. She Is the captain of the volleyball team, softball team, and is the head cheerleader. Also plays the flute, and is a straight A student. Everyone thought of Natalie as perfect. Even Whitney's parents continuously tell her that she should be more like Natalie. You would think these two would hate each other, but they are more like sisters than cousins, but like every friendship theirs has their ups, and downs. And like most friendship problems theirs involve a boy... or two, but its not what you think.
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