Cinderella's Escape

Cinderella's Escape

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WpMetadataReadConcluída sex, fev 12, 201626m
About 4 1/2 months ago, I got assigned an English project to type up a "fairy tale gone wrong" short story. I had a good three weeks to write the story, but, like my other short story on here which I wrote last year, "The Story of Octavia Pierce", I decided to wait until last minute to come up with this story. It took me all night to do it, but I'm super proud with how it turned out. And though I found out there were some minor errors after I sent it in to my teacher, I got an "A" on the story. I've been thinking about posting it on here for quite a while, but I always forgot to do it. And now here I am, finally posting it. I hope those of you reading this twisted version of Cinderella enjoy the story, and please leave comments below about punctuation errors, grammatical errors, or some suggestions on how I could have made the story better. Criticism always makes a write better! Post Scripture, this story was double spaced on a Google document, and I just copied it from there and pasted it onto here, so I apologize if the paragraphs/dialogue/etc. are spaced kind of oddly.
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I wanted to do a bit of a rewrite again I'm sorry I'm hardly ever happy with the results and it has to be completely perfect so please bare with me . it takes alot for me to be happy with what I write . any spellings or mistakes in my writing please tell me if you see any. thanks for actually reading this X . here's the actual discription. I could have had a normal life but after getting myself in trouble that chance was completely lost I couldn't change what happened I wish I could but I blew it. the consequences are well I can never leave my room or even see the sun for the fear that she's there telling me what I've done wrong. over and over making me know there's no chance I can change my ways. however how wrong she was. I could have made it better but I didn't I only made it worse for myself

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