Linkin Park After Dark

Welcome to a city where almost nothing is what it seems and a certain girl leads an uneventful life. However, one fateful meeting at the park changes everything. Caught in a middle of magical storm, she discovers the world full of wonder and danger, where promises are currency and honor is most valued.
And she tries to make sense of it by writing to a person she never met.
Oh, but be careful. Here be dragons.

As I'm not an English speaker, this story is a challenge to write. I'm sure it's full of mistakes, but I hope the story is interesting enough to make it worth while.