The Slap (undergoing editing)
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Last published Thu, Aug 28, 2014
It all started with a slap....
Kaitlyn Montgomry was just your average teenager, but she suffered in the shadow cast by what she considered her fatal flaw. She was in love with baseball superstar and former best friend Jacob Burns. After spending years watching him rise to societal fame, she finally decided that she'd had enough of waiting for him to finally notice how completely, how desperately she loved him. So she asked the impossible of him. Little did either of them know that that one decision would alter their lives completely. In the years that follow their little twist of fate, their worlds would collide in a love that would end friendships, create enemies, and spark a flame that would burn forever.
So what do you think? Will their love prevail over all just like in romance novels and chic-flics? Or will it cough, sputter and die, leaving them disoriented and alone? Read on and find out, and may these words keep you forever guessing and sitting on the edge of your seat.
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