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Suicide
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Complete, First published Feb 15, 2016
This poem was written a while back by a 13 year old me so it is by no means perfect. I was in a real tough time and I turned to poetry and writing to get my emotions out. This and my other works are examples of that.

It's just about, well, suicide. May seem plain and simple but that's all there is to this poem. It's a decent length but, as you'll notice, there is some repetition which helps to make it an easier read. I don't really use archaic language nor hidden symbols so what you read is what you get.

There are little errors here and there but to err is human so you can just politely point out any you see and I'll get to fixing them.
Suggestions are appreciated.
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It's just a bunch of songs I wrote when I was feeling mad or sad or extremely happy and motivated. Their just a bunch of lyrics formed from my emotions. I mean I was trying to figure out how to express myself so I started using rhymes to begin with. I mean some songs don't only have rhymes but most of my songs are rhymes with 4 or 6 lines and their all original works of mine so don't bother trying to steal them or anything. Also this is an add on I've started writing journal entries in here as well and I may put my two books together. My 'Ange's Journal', and 'Hidden Feelings' together. I don't know why, it's just a spur of the moment thing and a feeling I had. These are all my experiences and thoughts I've had but never said out loud. But if you don't like it or are offended by what I say your doing something wrong in life. But I guess it's also me just letting everything out and telling my story in an unorganized way, you know.