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Lengkap, Awal publikasi Feb 15, 2016
This poem was written a while back by a 13 year old me so it is by no means perfect. I was in a real tough time and I turned to poetry and writing to get my emotions out. This and my other works are examples of that.

It's just about, well, suicide. May seem plain and simple but that's all there is to this poem. It's a decent length but, as you'll notice, there is some repetition which helps to make it an easier read. I don't really use archaic language nor hidden symbols so what you read is what you get.

There are little errors here and there but to err is human so you can just politely point out any you see and I'll get to fixing them.
Suggestions are appreciated.
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Red isn't always romance, sometimes it's blood, Moon isn't always for lovers, but sometimes for secret cries, Flowers aren't always for marriage, but sometimes for grave, Petals aren't always soft, sometimes they prick the soul. No plagiarism/No hatred plz. Also some things might contain mature contents like self harm. I want to say those kinds of suicidal poems are not to inspire anyone to self harm. I'm strictly against self harm myself. Those thoughts are just a means to release myself. Started writing this book around 25th June, 2021