Manang/A Fledgling Hunter/Some Even Cooler Name I've Yet To Come Up WIth!

This a (titless) story I've been working on for the past two months. I'm not so sure what I think about it yet, so please feel free to tell me to burn it before I waste anymore time on it. The majority of the story is not on my computer as of yet, it is still in my notebook where this was originally transcribed. Hope you...don't hate it.