You can't save me Mr. Bad boy (old version!)
rose_Goldhearts
  • Reads 67,422
  • Votes 1,826
  • Parts 37
  • Time 2h 37m
  • Reads 67,422
  • Votes 1,826
  • Parts 37
  • Time 2h 37m
rose_Goldhearts
Ongoing, First published Feb 17, 2016
arrogantbadboybestfriendsbrothersdramaevefamilygoodgirlhalfsisterheartbreakloveplayerromanceromesistersteenteenfictiontragedy
This is the old version! Please go read the revised version on my page!

Tragedy wether it's good or bad life is full of it. Especially mine. 

My name is Evelyn Taylor I live with my mom dad two sisters and brother. Life couldn't get any better until it takes a nosedive for the worse, but did it really.
---------
Mom walked in with a panicked look on her face. Oh great I was going to get an ear full from her.
"Oh my goodness Evelyn are you okay sweet heart?" She asked and when I nod my head yes her face goes from panicked and scared to the face she makes right before you get yelled at. " Don't you ever do that to me again! You almost gave me a heart attack!" She almost yells at me.
"Mom don't yell heart attack like that in a hospital that's just as bad as yelling fire in a crowded theater."  I tell her almost laughing. She then walks up and slaps me playfully on the upper arm," Ha ha ha that was so funny I almost forgot to laugh." She says rolling her eyes. Now I see where I get my, sarcasm, attitude and temper from. It was all her.
"Okay on a more serious note. "She says. Oh no what have I done now.
"We- your father and I- have decided that since you made a very valid point- wether you were ranting or not- that you have worked way to hard to let it all go now. So you will be moving in with Christopher when we leave for North Carolina."
------------

Warning ⚠️- the first three chapters are terrible. I'm going to rewrite them when I get the chance. 
There will be a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. 

Who is Christopher? Why is her family moving to north Carolina? What has Evelyn worked to hard for to give up? Check out the story to find out more.
Warning: May be a little boring at first but it will get better.
All Rights Reserved. Please don't steal my story or any content without my permission. Thank you. Byee.
All Rights Reserved
arrogantbadboybestfriendsbrothersdramaevefamilygoodgirlhalfsisterheartbreakloveplayerromanceromesistersteenteenfictiontragedy
Table of contents

37 parts

Sign up to add You can't save me Mr. Bad boy (old version!) to your library and receive updates
or
#529rome
Content Guidelines
You may also like
Maybe Just One More by BrookeDittmar93
35 parts Complete Mature
Avery wrapped an arm around my waist to catch me before I could get out the door. He pushed me up against the door, trapping me between his body and the door. "What's wrong?" I asked innocently. His face hovered over mine, much closer than I was used to. His gaze didn't leave mine as he spoke. "It would have been different if I had told him from the start. You wanted me to lie for you. You started this. If we tell him what really happened, he would be pissed at me for lying to him." "Stormie, you got a phone call!" Mason yelled up the stairs. The closeness between Avery and me started to make my legs feel like Jell-O, and I couldn't make sense of it. Our breathing became heavier. His eyes trapped mine. "Answer him," Avery murmured. "Uh," I stammered. I cleared my throat. "Be down in a minute!" My voice came out higher than usual. My gaze still couldn't escape Avery's. My heart raced wildly as his chest rose and fell against mine. Avery's gaze flickered to my lips. What's happening? My gaze fell to his mouth, which was moving closer to mine. Stormie West is brave, kind, and young. She has a lot to learn about love, trust, lust, and heartbreak. Stormie's older brother, Mason, is brave, cocky, and a bit of an asshole. He's the wide receiver for the high school football team. Avery Prince is Mason's best friend. Avery has it all, popularity, star quarterback, and girls. What more could he want, right? #1 in Quarterback 11/10/2020 #1 in action-adventure 11/15/2020
The Devil is Marvelous by thatsaqua
67 parts Complete Mature
"Ava, you have to be quiet! They'll hear you-" Tears started to spill from my eyes, blending in with the rain that dripped down my face. I shouldn't have come here. The last time I followed someone I made accidentally noise and got them killed. I had to get away from Jaxon. I turned on my heel, ready to run to, but Jaxon grabbed my wrist. "Let go" I choked, "I have to leave. You're in danger-" The next thing I knew, his lips crashed onto mine. His arms wrapped around my body, pulling tightly to his chest. "Stop it" I sobbed, unable to control my trembling. "Why are you doing this? Let me go-" "I had to get you quiet" he murmured. "Please Ava. You have to try to calm down. I understand you're scared right now, but you have to trust me. We're going to get home safely. Stay with me a few more minutes, and then we'll get the f*ck out of here. I promise." -- A little about Ava: She has made the long move from Detroit, Michigan to California to escape her gruesome past. She moves in with her older sister, and is ready to start her junior year of high school. Despite the demons she carries, she holds onto hope for a bright future. A little about Jaxon: he's 17, and Oceanview High's resident bad boy. He comes from the Marvel family, a family of cold-hearted millionaires who don't seem to care much about their kids. He's also got a secret only few know, he's a dangerous member, and street racer, for the L.A. gang: Crimson Blaze. -- Achievements: #1 in streetracing #1 in teenromance #2 im highschool #3 in drama Hey all! This is my first every full story, raw and unedited. This story will not be rushed, so updates will be about once a week. Thank you SO much for reading, I hope you enjoy! Disclaimer: This story uses mature language and themes that may be disturbing to some - read at your own risk.
MY SPOILT BRAT by halymahxoxo
29 parts Complete
"She is spoilt rotten, she has absolutely zero manners. A rich spoilt brat is what she is. I don't like her! I really don't! I cant stand a minute with her. " I said, frustration evident in my voice. " Oh My dear boy. Please don't be like this. We need the money. It's been so hard without your father. I am already in a lot of debt as it is and its just been a year since he died, God bless his wonderful soul." My mom says sniffing back her tears. "Her father is offering you 5000 dollar's a month just to tutor her on weekends. That's what I make in five months!. Don't let this foolish dislike for Danielle cost us this great opportunity. Plus, you never know. The two of you may become friends eventually " she finished, forcing a smile. We did need the money. And I'd do anything to see my mother happy. I got up from sitting beside her, my hands in my pocket. I didn't look at her when I spoke. I really hated what I was about to agree to. "I'd do it Mom. But only because of you. Because you and I do need the money. But about me and her being friends..... Its not going to happen Mom. I can guarantee that" I finally looked at her and she was smiling, a real smile. I'd do anything to always see her smile like this. She has been sad for too long. "Id see you later Mom" I say and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek and rushed out of the house.
Keep It Together (Completed) by adori-ing
24 parts Complete
"I have bad news, sweetheart," I heard my mother's voice crack as she spoke those 5 words. 5 simple words that when are put together is the most nerve-wracking sentence. I felt the nerves as I cleared my throat preparing myself for the worse, "What's going on, mom?" "Evelyn, it's your father," she paused before continuing, "Cancer's back, and this time; it's going to be harder to win this battle" --- Evelyn Walker, 19-year-old attending UCLA in Los Angeles, California. Here, she lives an average life with her 2 best friends leaving behind her 6 other siblings and parents back in Ohio. When she receives the life-changing news from her mother, she gets on the train and tries to get home for Christmas. Her trip back home just couldn't go right after she's reunited with a cocky, British ex-boyfriend named Nathan Wilson. Will Evelyn get home on time? Will she fall in love again in the process? ------ This story has not been edited.
Choosing Jada [Book 2] by KindaWerid
17 parts Ongoing Mature
A dead woman walking would make anyone do a double take. She never thought she would see him again. He never thought she could have survived. More questions left than answers Jada and Alessio must finally work together. Nothing was right in the world without Jada in it and now nothing was right with her in it either. Book Excerpt: "Where are you trying to take me? You snagged us up, but where are we going," She asked pointedly. "To my grandparent's home." "That's a terrible idea. We need a safe place to go, not somewhere so obvious." "My grandfather knows important people. Trust me, he's the safest place in Italy we could be." "No, I won't just blindly follow your lead. I won't risk my sons life on something like that." "And where would you go? How would you be any safer? If it wasn't for me, our son would be long gone. You have no resources. You have nothing. Somehow, I am the bad guy!" "Yes you're the fucking bad guy, you can't trip me into marriage and then putting me through hell as I tried my best to survive. You're the bad guy because I never agree to be with a criminal master mind or whatever you do. I have no idea. I don't know anything about you. I was cheated on and lied to just as much. Don't go blaming your hurt feelings all on me. You started this. You are the reason. I'm finally reacting to the way you treated me! I was delusional, scared, and confused. You isolated me from my people. I wasn't okay. I've been ripped from the life I knew!" [In Progress 4/19/24- ] Rankings #118 Man #44 deathandlife #5 lovetragedy
Eve Black by _nova_writes
35 parts Complete Mature
Meet Eve Black: I decided to flirt with the guy that did it, "Heyyyy cutie," I say with a wink. "Hey, pretty lady," he says in a gross seductive tone. I can't deny that he is very handsome. He had piercing green eyes that would make any girl go weak at the knees. But I am not any girl. "Can I ask you something?" before he could respond I continue, "Why did you try to drug me?" He looks shocked as my tone went from flirtatious to serious in a matter of two seconds. "Well, I have no idea what you are talking about," he says while slightly panicking. I stand up, "Well if you don't know what I am talking about then why don't you take a sip of my drink?" a few heads turned our way and start watching. "N-no I am good," he stammers confirming that he did in fact try to drug me as I suspected. "You know what, I don't give a damn what you say you 'don't know anything about' because I know what you tried to do to me." I pick up my drink and smash the glass on his head. I watch as the pink drink that was in the glass stains his white button-up collar shirt and his face turns red with anger and embarrassment. As I am walking out I yell back, "You know damn well what you did too." I flip him the bird and I leave the bar and Hazel and all her friends behind. *** Book Cover done by @_navyblueee_
Falling In Love With The Bad Boy by lynzsims
23 parts Complete Mature
"I'm Aiden," he said then held out his hand. "Yeah.. I.. I remembered.. Aiden. You're Nate's best friend slash brother." "Oh, you don't prefer handshakes? Hugs, kisses?" he asked. "What?" I asked. "Nevermind. So.. who do you like at the moment?" "What?" "Just answer the question, Charlotte." "Uh.. why do you wanna know?" I ask him. "Alright.. since that made you feel uncomfortable.. do you have a boyfriend?" "Um.. that made me feel more uncomfortable, Aiden.." I told him. "Sorry, but I wanted to know before I got to know you a little. I don't want any competition. Because you're a really pretty girl, you know that, Char?" he said to me. That made me blushed a little. "Um.. no. I don't have a boyfriend..." I answered. *We start off with Charlotte Ridgeway, age 17. Her twin, Charlie Ridgeway, age 17 as well. Duh, because they're twins. They're both in high school, obviously. They don't really look alike, I mean they do, but they aren't like, identical, different genders, you know.. Anyways, Charlotte switched schools because her family had to move, so now she is known as the new girl, same goes for Charlie, the new guy. Charlotte meets this really nice guy, Nate. Nate has this best friend who is the biggest jerk in school, school's player, bad boy, Aiden Throns. Nate tells Aiden that he really likes Charlotte. Aiden and Nate are like brothers, I mean, Nate was adopted by Aiden's parents, so Aiden cares about him, like he is his biological brother. Aiden thinks that Charlotte is using Nate for his brain, because Nate is a super smart guy, knowing Charlotte, she had a brain tumor, so she isn't the brightest/smartest. Aiden will do anything for Nate, so he decides that he is going to make Charlotte fall in love with him. Does he accomplish that? Will she fall in love with him, the bad boy? Read to find out!* Credits are mines. PG-13!!!
My Unknown Family by vnxcmnhv
46 parts Complete Mature
Evelyn was kidnapped at the age of two from her family by her very own mother. Isabella Adelaine was the mother of Evelyn and most of her brothers. She ran away from Evelyn's father when Evelyn was two. Along their journey came Chase Miller, her stepfather. He was everything a child could ever want from their father, but when he and Isabella got married, he turned into a monster that no child could ever imagine. In her first teenage year, she got raped by the monster called her stepfather. She never got to experience a normal kid's childhood, but her real family is more than ready to give her the teenage years she deserves. * One day, she starts going to the school her brothers go to. What she didn't expect was to meet someone she wished she could've forgotten. He was the only person she had ever trusted to tell about the abuse. He was the person she had a crush on. He was her childhood best friend. The day he left because of his family business was the day she became heartbroken. He was always there for her when she needed him, but then she suffered all alone. After him, she never trusted a single soul with her secret. She thought that everyone would eventually leave her. * The day Isabella and Chase didn't come back to the house was the day she had been waiting for her entire life. Chase and Isabella had been in an accident that neither of them survived, according to the police. Chase's body was never found, but the car blew up, so no one believed that Chase could've survived. ** Started: The 1st of September, 2022 Finished: The 20th of May, 2023 100K reads on 16.7.2023
Your Cheating Heart by whoisaheretic
30 parts Complete
"I want to go back to my old ways." Ezra said in a monotone. It felt like he held no emotion. I stood dumbfounded not knowing what to do? "I tried you know, it's been eleven fucking months we're dating and I still can't expct anything from you to pleasure me." Is this what our relationship was all about? I thought to myself. Still didn't have the guts to say anything. "The hell how can I want you Leila? You're own mother didn't even want you." As soon as those words came out of his mouth, I felt like something died inside of me that day. 'My own mother didn't even wanted me.' I heard some people gasp not believing that was actually happening. I held my head high and with as much grace as I could muster I walked out of the gym that was so beautifully decorated for the homecoming. ___________________________________ Erza Abe Alder heartthrob of Lake Pearl High school. Leila Grace Rena not the kind of girl you come across everyday. Read further and find out what happens when Ezra dumps Leila at senior prom? They're soon off to collage as they have a whole new set of adventure ,trouble, ups and downs mixing a little bit of jealous ex-boyfriend drama, a whole lot of making out and love triangle and then finally came love.
Loving the Enemy by PeacefullyUnknown
33 parts Complete
Dear Olive, I hate you. I hate that you were born and that your human and have a face. I hate that you live next door to me and I hate that I can't sleep at night because the thought of you has forever left a vivid image creased in the back of my mind. And most of all, I hate that you hate me. Hate, Everest Since the first grade when Olivia Kingston and her family moved in right across the street from Kyle Everest, he had believed to have instantly hated her. (At least thats how he tells the story) And maybe it was just because of the mere fact of her existence, or maybe it was that time she ate the last fruit snack at lunch, or let's not forget, in fifth grade she stole his partner in crime, being his twin sister Madeline. Now being 17 years old Kyle Everest still holds this unknown resentment against his next door neighbor Olivia Kingston, and torches her in any possible way he can, but what would happen when Olivia finally gets sick of letting Kyle torcher her unexplainably? Everything would change in the matter of one day when Olivia accidentally gets them both locked in the principals office in search of the same thing: The truth. But while staying together in a cramped room with no phones and surviving off nothing but the secret stash of their principal, while the entire schools is off on spring break, secrets will be told and feeling will unravel. And let's not forget, hate letters will be sent. This book may seem light and fun but it has some mature scenes and dark thoughts that I'd suggest for viewers 16+
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
Maybe Just One More cover
The Devil is Marvelous cover
MY SPOILT BRAT cover
Keep It Together (Completed) cover
Choosing Jada [Book 2] cover
Eve Black cover
Falling In Love With The Bad Boy cover
My Unknown Family cover
Your Cheating Heart cover
Loving the Enemy cover

Maybe Just One More

35 parts Complete Mature

Avery wrapped an arm around my waist to catch me before I could get out the door. He pushed me up against the door, trapping me between his body and the door. "What's wrong?" I asked innocently. His face hovered over mine, much closer than I was used to. His gaze didn't leave mine as he spoke. "It would have been different if I had told him from the start. You wanted me to lie for you. You started this. If we tell him what really happened, he would be pissed at me for lying to him." "Stormie, you got a phone call!" Mason yelled up the stairs. The closeness between Avery and me started to make my legs feel like Jell-O, and I couldn't make sense of it. Our breathing became heavier. His eyes trapped mine. "Answer him," Avery murmured. "Uh," I stammered. I cleared my throat. "Be down in a minute!" My voice came out higher than usual. My gaze still couldn't escape Avery's. My heart raced wildly as his chest rose and fell against mine. Avery's gaze flickered to my lips. What's happening? My gaze fell to his mouth, which was moving closer to mine. Stormie West is brave, kind, and young. She has a lot to learn about love, trust, lust, and heartbreak. Stormie's older brother, Mason, is brave, cocky, and a bit of an asshole. He's the wide receiver for the high school football team. Avery Prince is Mason's best friend. Avery has it all, popularity, star quarterback, and girls. What more could he want, right? #1 in Quarterback 11/10/2020 #1 in action-adventure 11/15/2020

More details