Black beauty
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Ongoing7m
Last published Wed, Mar 21, 2018
Hey guys,
So this is my first time of writing and am not sure am that good but I was willing to try. I just posted this short story to get feedback on what I should improve on and if the story is nice or not so to see if to continue
. Please don't be too harsh. Thanks!
it has always being the opposite for blacks..
Never get what they want. ... Always being looked down on...
Are we meant to sacrifice ourselves because we black...
that's not fair. .... Black's are also human.... They have feelings,ideas,dreams to fulfill. ...
It's advisable to not to look down on blacks....Not because their perfect but because their human.
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