(rewrite of "save me")
Mitch is 18 and lives in the upper west side of Manhattan and attends Juilliard. He has a couple of friends but mostly keeps to himself. Then, in the middle of his final semester, someone new comes into his classes. The new guy, Jerome, seems like the type of guy who would get caught for doing drugs or vandalizing some building.
Jerome has had a rough childhood, and he always been known for all the bad things he's done, like being kicked out of 4 high schools in 1 year. But there's one thing that he can never let go, and never turn away from. An old, scrapy, cello. He's been playing since he was 5, but he can't let anyone know.
One day, someone hears Jerome practicing, shocked seeing the boy doing something other then the horrible things he's been known to do. After a while, he decided to apply to Juilliard. When the two meet, neither of them have ever known a person like the other...........
(I told you it would be better)
"I made the decision to cheat on my wife because I liked the way you made me feel vulnerable and comfortable enough to open up to you the night before it happened. I ain't never did shit like that before and that's what made it easy for me to choose to risk everything I got for you."
"That shit probably not a big deal to you but a nigga like me ain't never opened up to nobody but my best friend-and still..that's rare. I hate even talking about her with you but I don't even feel comfortable talking to Ariana about my feelings 'cause I know she gon' judge me. You don't make me feel like that."