"I Find Peace In The Rain"
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Last published Thu, Feb 18, 2016
This is the result of a writing prompt.
« Write a scene in which a character's last words are: "I find peace in the rain." »
I didn't really use any emotion in this story because
a) I wanted this to feel finished and
b) I was using this as a warm up for the writing that I really care about.
Not to say that I'm disappointed with how it turned out. I think it's okay but I'm always up for constructive criticism!
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