Forever? Always

I had started this story 3 years ago with my friends and now I am finally finishing it. It may start out weird and boring and all the way throughout the book as well. I am kind of an amateur at this and please feel free to leave comments and ideas on what i should do or what's wrong. It can be negative or positive. I didn't know what to get for the cover and I thought that would look ok. Also, this is for mature readers only. There is some sexual content. But not until far into the story and just to let you know, some of the chapters are really short, I will probably post 2 or 3 chapters depending on how small they are; but just keep reading, hope you like it. I want to be a writer, so I kinda need to know if it's good or not so I don't make a fool of myself and think I'm good but I'm actually not. So I would really appreciate it if you did comment. I will post a new chapter every few days or within a week, it all just depends on how much I get done. thank you so much and hope you enjoy.