Crushed || HEAVY EDITING
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❝baby don't cry when I'm gone when you were the reason I left in the first place❞
| award top #2 best jortini book 2016 |
| award : winner of the best jortini fanfiction 2017 |
| cover made by: me |
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She was a normal girl walking on the streets eating ice cream talking with her boyfriend as they laughed at the most immature things ever. She was living her day dream until everything turned to hell. Her dad started drinking, her boyfriend left her and all her friends left her alone in the dark. Having no other way, she moved to a new town ready to start a new life.
And just when she thought that she left everything and everyone behind her, a familiar face suddenly showed up again. That person came to turn her world upside down, again.
Will she be able to walk with a crushed heart again? And will she be able to see why her ex, acutally broke up with her?
WARNING : I wrote this book one year ago and my english wasn't good back then. However, I'm editing the book right now but you can always read it if grammar errors and spelling mistakes doesn't bother you.
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Second story
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By: @Violetta_Vargas
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