An Attack on Titan Love story: (OC) Naomi x Annie

Its a Work In Progress....this is my first book.
Tell me if its good or not and feel free to correct me.
I do not own attack on titan or any of the characters (except my oc Naomi)
Please read. Im trying to learn how to be a good writer. And hopefully become an actual author someday.
Also this is yuri! Don't read if you don't like it!