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Letting Him In

Letting Him In

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Feb 12, 2025
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Mystery
Rahul and Peter, a newly engaged couple, have been dating for six years now. What seemed to be a loving relationship quickly falls apart. Rahul's world is shattered leaving him broken. He put up his walls making sure that no one will have access to his heart. After an unforeseen accident at the plant Rahul works at, something doesn't sit right with him. Thoughts of what could have went wrong plagues his waking moments which drives him to launch his own investigation in this matter. What he may uncover will leave him reeling and questioning everything he knows. Also, little does he know, someone is around the corner waiting to detonate the charge that will break through all of his defences in one fell swoop. *This is my first attempt at writing a story. So any kind criticism would highly be appreciated* Enjoy :)
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This is my first story so please show loveπŸ’• πŸ’• 😘. And let me know if there is any adjustment needed...... In a world where quiet moments of peace and subtle connections define her existence, Riya's life is about to take a dramatic turn. Shy, introverted, and often lost in her own thoughts, Riya has always felt safe in her small, predictable world. From the warm afternoons spent feeding birds with her younger brother to the occasional flirtatious banter with her schoolmate, Yogesh, Riya's life has been a gentle stream flowing toward the unknown. But Yogesh-handsome, confident, and effortlessly charming-has always been a captivating presence in her life. He sees something in Riya that no one else does: a quiet strength beneath her shy demeanor. Together, they share stolen moments of connection and playful badminton matches, where flirtation weaves its way into their friendship. Yet, for all the tenderness between them, Riya feels an unsettling pull toward a darker side of her world that she can't quite escape. Living under the same roof is Rajat, an older boy whose unsettling presence begins to cloud Riya's sense of security. While his casual smiles and strange, lingering looks might seem harmless at first, the growing tension between them quickly shatters the calm of her world. When the boundaries of what is right and wrong blur, Riya finds herself trapped in an unbearable situation, one that will forever change the course of her life. Torn between the innocence of her past and the horrors that begin to unfold, Riya undergoes a transformation that no one could have anticipated. As she becomes something otherworldly, seeking revenge for the horrors that have befallen her, the girl once defined by shyness and innocence morphs into a force to be reckoned with. But with each life she takes and each decision she makes, she is forced to confront the terrifying truth: What happens when the girl you once were is lost forever?

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