Red vs Blue: Tucker's Farewell

I just finished watching RvB season 13, and needless to say it left me emotionally devastated. As I dealt with it, I wondered how the characters in the show would deal with it, and so it led me to write this. Pretty big spoilers for season 13. It's my first work and I tried to write it in Tucker's voice as best as I could, and I'd be incredibly grateful for any critique to make my next work better.