David's Dilemma
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David wakes up finding himself in a room...alone. He finds out that he is on an alien ship in the middle of nowhere. David has to endure 3 different challenges. They will test his intelligence, puzzle solving skills and strength both physically and mentally. Not being the best at puzzles, David needs to use these skills he does have to complete the challenges. The worst part is that if David does not complete the challenges in one day, he will run out of oxygen and die. Will David be able to complete these 3 challenges in the time he has? Will he ever get to see his family again? Will he ever make it back home to tell about his adventure, or will he die a horrible death? Only time will tell!
I decided to write a actual story, because I could. What I have is just the bare bones. I want to try and add more description. Grammatical criticism is advised.
WIP It might look finished but I am still adding.
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