David's Dilemma

David's Dilemma

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David wakes up finding himself in a room...alone. He finds out that he is on an alien ship in the middle of nowhere. David has to endure 3 different challenges. They will test his intelligence, puzzle solving skills and strength both physically and mentally. Not being the best at puzzles, David needs to use these skills he does have to complete the challenges. The worst part is that if David does not complete the challenges in one day, he will run out of oxygen and die. Will David be able to complete these 3 challenges in the time he has? Will he ever get to see his family again? Will he ever make it back home to tell about his adventure, or will he die a horrible death? Only time will tell! I decided to write a actual story, because I could. What I have is just the bare bones. I want to try and add more description. Grammatical criticism is advised. WIP It might look finished but I am still adding.
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Killian

"I lost him, he's gone. If I'm not careful I will be too" -------------------------- He looks healthy now. His cheeks are rosy red, his lips aren't cracked. He looks good, he looks his age. But I still don't know why we're in the hospital. Alone, no, We're stuck in the room, his face pales. Like the day we got the news. No, wait what's happeing, His eyes, his body, his smile it all fades. I'm not ready, not yet. I just want to hold him one last time, give me one last chance to say goodbye. Just one more. "Sophia" Not now. I just need to say goodbye, let me say goodbye. "Sophia" I turn around, my hair is in my face, he's dissapeared, where is he. I frantically look around me. I'm in darkness. Empty, darkness. "Sophia" No, I had him. -------------------------- Killian Miller died four years ago. Leaving his sister Sophia Miller to grieve. What he hoped didn't happen, happened and now she has completely lost it. She isn't living anymore, but she's surviving. Each day harder then the other. August Stead comes into her life. Will he be able to help, will he be able to love again? -------------------------- Started: 27th July 2020 Completed: 12th October 2020 Editing completed: 27th December 2021

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