Secrets, Lust, and Mates??

Jessica has no family blood related. She has foster parents that she loves deeply. She got forced to move to California where he foster dad got a new job. Jessica had an autistic brother who died getting beaten from her father. her father died of acohoal poisoning that same night. She used to be the bad girl, in order to scare the kids who picked on her brother. At her new school, Jessica has promised herself, NO boys, NO fighting. She was just going to blend. Just get threw life. Until she meets a mysteries guy named Blake. She feels a pull to him. Everytime they touch she feels a pleasureful shock course threw her body. She can't help but wonder if he feels it to, or if she is just crazy. Breaking her promise Jessica is curious about Blake, she starts getting very interested in him, She knows he is hiding a HUGE secret. But she can't put her finger on it.......
-Hey guys sorry if the first part is bad its the very first story I have ever written but I have ideas in my head. Let me know what you think of it, bad things good things, anything I need to improve on, or just wanting to help me write it, send ideas, I would love to hear your guys thoughts. -Kiana