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This is considered the 3rd version of the story, I am editing the 4th version for publication. The official book is planned to come out somewhere around 2026-2027 but I still have to finish the manuscript.

I posted this story on RoyalRoad and Fiction press, I haven't looked at either site in years. 

A life full of joy and tragedy, Vila's story begins with the very person she despises. Thankfully, a man by the name of Sommi rescues her from the clutches of her master. Years go by with her bubble of ignorance to what goes on anywhere else and she lives happily on the outskirts of Kai village. This all changes when she comes home from the market one day to find her little hut ransacked and her hero, Sommi, gone. A man named Vensen haunts her every thought as she travels the country of Aishy and the void itself in search of her father figure. Many strange and horrifying events take place as Vila also encounters revelations of who she is and the family she comes from. None of it makes sense, and yet there is a hidden string of order in it all. 
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        Written by Robin Dobi, all rights reserved as of 2010 (c) (first draft)
          3rd revision. First book of trilogy/chronicles. Picture was made soley by me! Any and all copies of this story without the author's permission or knowledge is illegal. Those who are bold enough to commit such a crime will be prosecuted!
        Rated as mature content for language, violence, and dark concepts. 16 years of age and up is the suggested maturity. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
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          --Quick notes: I have finally finished this book on it's third remake, but I still would appreciate the feedback and be happy to make any changes that would make the story better!^.^
        --The cast members I list off are voice actors because when I write, I picture the story as an anime; hope this doesn't ruin anything.
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