Amazement
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 2h 30m
Ongoing, First published Jun 25, 2013
"Wait up!"  It was after school and Maddie was walking to her bike. Luke's voice sounded behind her, but Maddie didn't stop.  "I have to get home," she replied  She could hear his footsteps behind her, but that didn't stop her. Instead, she quickened her pace.  "Maddie, wait."  Maddie turned and faced him. "Why should I? Look, I really need to get home."  "But I have a good reason."  Luke's voice was playful, almost taunting, as he walked closer to her.  Now that he was inches away, Maddie could see that his eyes weren't just plain blue. They had flecks of amber and navy, and they were rimmed green. And he had freckles, adorable little brown freckles scattered across his cheekbones and across the bridge of his perfect nose...  "And what's that?" Maddie's voice hitched in her throat.  "I need tutoring."  "I doubt that. School just started, like, two days ago." Maddie knew that she was being sarcastic and she was exaggerating, but she didn't care.  Maddie turned on her heel and once more walked towards her bike. Depositing her books in the basket, she swung one leg over the seat.  "So, see you tomorrow at three thirty, at your house? It's a date, then."  With that, he turned and walked to his car, leaving a flabbergasted Maddie behind.  "I never agreed!" Maddie called after him.  But it was too late.  She was already choking on the fumes of his black Lexus convertible. ___________________ At 17, Maddie Parker stood at exactly 5'0 and weighed only 97 pounds. But that was because she was born four months premature. She had exactly two friends in the world.  Until Luke shows up.  He invites Maddie into a world of partying teens; a world that Maddie had never seen before.  But sometimes, too much of a good thing could be fatal. _____________________ Copyright © 2013 by bellaaa474  Book cover, and book name {Amazement™} are trademarks of bellaaa474. All rights reserved.
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