PATCHED PERFECTION
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Ongoing28m
Last published Fri, Mar 11, 2016
First attempt at writing a story here I go.
Meet Lorriella Hemsworth. Perfect girl with a perfect life. At least till drama decides to make an appearance in her life. First stop, the return of Noah Winter. What next?
How would you pick your life back up if you were her?
Well all I can say is that it may end well despite the downs one may meet in life.
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Suggestions are more than welcome.(I look forward to it for improving the story)
I may not be able to update very much but i will aim for at least 1 part a week.
please understand.
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Fan fictions are allowed but must be dedicated to me.
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