PATCHED PERFECTION

PATCHED PERFECTION

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First attempt at writing a story here I go. Meet Lorriella Hemsworth. Perfect girl with a perfect life. At least till drama decides to make an appearance in her life. First stop, the return of Noah Winter. What next? How would you pick your life back up if you were her? Well all I can say is that it may end well despite the downs one may meet in life. Do vote and comment. Suggestions are more than welcome.(I look forward to it for improving the story) I may not be able to update very much but i will aim for at least 1 part a week. please understand. Do not, reproduce any part of the story. Fan fictions are allowed but must be dedicated to me.
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Lea, your average 17-year-old. Battling insecurities, education, drama and not to mention, zits! Now she has to battle her hormones as well. And maybe...deal with those who battle for her attention? "You are mine" *my first attempt at writing. If you read, and like it, please vote! If there are any mistakes I may have overlooked, please criticise! Constructive criticism is very much appreciated. And if you hate it, please tell me why so I may make necessary corrections in future. I understand that its not possible for everyone to be happy with my writing but I'm going to try. please like and vote! Every vote encourages me to write more. THANKS!!*

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