Timothy Garner
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Last published Mon, Mar 7, 2016
I wrote this story for my English class and decided to post it on here to see what you guys think.
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"I sank deeper into the cupboard the only sound that could be heard was my heart pounding in my ears and the sound of my breathing coming out in short ragged pants" Timothy Garner a 10 year old boy has been abused and mistreated by his parents his entire life, but one Halloween night everything is about to change.
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