She was gone.
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There was a bone chilling crash as the plate shattered into a million pieces on the granite dining table. Aisha's entire family, her world, had become that plate. Her sobs echoed throughout the house and every bone ached with pain. She had lost her daughter, her only daughter. The thought made Aisha convulse, Zara who she was forced to disown was gone, dead, and would never be again.
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