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There was a bone chilling crash as the plate shattered into a million pieces on the granite dining table. Aisha's entire family, her world, had become that plate. Her sobs echoed throughout the house and every bone ached with pain. She had lost her daughter, her only daughter. The thought made Aisha convulse, Zara who she was forced to disown was gone, dead, and would never be again. 


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"please papa......believe me i didn't do anything...Pls trust me .." "You dumb girl...I cant believe you are my daughter ..i am ashamed to call you my daughter you good for nothing bitch... then i feel a sting on my cheek.. this is not the first time my father or my so called family has raised an hand on me.. but i still haven't get use to it.. the women who gave birth to me s standing at door with smirk on her face that saw hatred and satisfaction like she wanted my father to hurt me... And my so called older brothers are waiting for their turn to hit me and drain their anger on me.... What was my fault ??that i want the love i deserve.. ********************************************************************************* "Who are you??" "i am your father my dear..pls believe me.." the stranger man said "sorry sir but you cant be cause my father is at home waiting for me with my other family..." "pls baby don't gave us this punishment i know we have hurt you but you can not just not remember us" now the women as i presume the strangers wife said "pls princess don't do this to us...come with us and you will get the love you deserve...we will always protect you and never hurt you..." the stranger's sun said "I am getting the love i deserve I have loving parents for whom i am their life. Four Brothers that loves me deeply and can do anything..And friends that are die for...pls i know you have lost your daughter but you can not declare someone as your daughter" i said softly... "Nonsense you are My daughter ..Amara Rose Williamson" "No i am Rosa Amyra Richerdson" ******************************************************************************** she didn't know for what she was receiving the punishment and betrayal for the ones supposed to love her..but when she live then the realize the gem stone she was... can she forgive them ? or she will live her life with the people that called her their family??