She Walks In The Night Among The Trees.
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This is A Short Story that I wrote When I was just sitting at school. Tell me What you guys Think, i Love to know what you guys think about it and If I need to improve anything.
I have not written much and don't know how to continue it so if you want it to continue please send me some ideas of what to do next. xxx
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