The Undoing
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Ongoing, First published Mar 09, 2016
Mature
I see a gate in the middle of nowhere. I walk up to the door and see a slot that says "stick sword here" so I stuck my sword in and the door clicked and I entered into what seemed to be a waiting room. Kind of like a doctors office. There were young children, babies, moms, dads, teens, and old people. They all wore black and stared into the distance. Like they were in  a trance. The only one who seemed normal was the man in a white toga like thing. He stood by a door. I decided to sit down in an empty chair. The man next to me seemed to snap out of his trance and pointed to the man in white. "See that man? He will grant you any wish that you wish." He said. I sat there for a minute and pondered what I should wish for.
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Antique store owner Liz brings home a Victorian taxidermy hound from auction, unwittingly unleashing dark forces on her wife and son. ***** Nat Loman has finally married the love of her life, Liz, and is getting used to her role as stepmother to Liz's 5-year-old son, Liam. The Loman family runs a bustling antique business so they attend a sale where a striking, black taxidermied hound is up for auction. Liz picks it up for the business, but it ends up being stored in their home, where Nat notices strange things occurring. She quickly discovers the past residents had died violently. Then she hears from a friend about the myth of "the devil's dog", a hound that perches in the shadows, tearing families apart from the inside. Soon, people around the Lomans are dying, and Liz is changing, darkening. It's up to Nat to save the woman she loves from the darkness closing in, and to save Liam from danger no matter what she has to sacrifice. [[Winner of the 2018 Wattys "Hidden Gems" category]] [[word count: 60,000-70,000 words]]