Three Wishes (a very rough draft)

This is a very rough draft of Three Wishes. please do comment on it so i can fix my errors. :)

Also, Three Wishes is actually one of my ideas for a Novel but since I'm currently writing Dreamer Chronicles, i cant write it. I cant write two novels at once. But due to demands of my friends slash critics, i should at least do a short story of Three Wishes. So yeah, here ya go guys! i do know that the story seemed to go too fast, just do understand that i turned an idea for a novel into a 2300+ word short story.