The Boy in the Red Raincoat

The Boy in the Red Raincoat

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~~~Nine Years ago~~~ I looked up at the little boy in the red raincoat once more. The same little boy who now held a large black umbrella over my head and thrust his hand out for me. I looked at him warily and trustingly placed my hand into his. He lifted me from the puddle spotted pavement and offered me a small smile. I dropped my head shyly, I was soaked to the bone and my face was red and splottchy from crying. I stared at my feet as I felt I small weight on my shoulders and looked up to see the red rain coat drapped over my back and that little boy still smiling. "The name's Teddy, short for Theodore" he shook my hand gently, that happy smile never falling from his lips even as I stared at him unresponsively. "What's your name?" I didn't respond. I couldn't. I mouthed it instead. 'Avondra' Theodore nodded "Okay Avondra, you're my new best friend and I'm yours. Now we sit next to each other on the bus and we share lunches and we talk all the time and we go over to each others houses and we have all kinds of fun. Okay?" My eyes widened and I just nodded. He couldn't be serious. Little did seven year old me realize that when that peculiar little boy walked away with his umbrella leaving me alone with his bright red rain coat...he'd meant every word he'd said that rainy Monday. Little did I also realize that nine years later those words would still be true. My name's Avondra. I'm mute and I have been since I was six years old. Doctor says it's selective mutism (Let's just say I didn't have the greatest childhood). Either way that rainy awful day was the day I found my bestfriend...Teddy. This is our story.
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Completed, but under editing and rewriting. Situation and diction may change, but not the storyline or character. *** "W-when d-did t-they b-build a w-w all on t-the h-hallway?" I asked no one in particular. I rubbed my head with my eyes shut to ease the pain that shot through my head. The sound of laughter made me freeze with my hand on my head. I opened my eyes, slowly. Three handsome boys were staring at me. No, two of the boys were trying to stifle a smile while one of the boys was staring blankly at me. Rude much? It seemed he was the one I hit and not a wall. Thanks Mary for stating the obvious. I stared at his chest probably because he was taller than I am and I had to look up to meet his face. His abs were visible through the blue shirt he wore. Staring at abs in this situation. Oh God! I'm weird. "First you get to be called a wall, interesting. And now, she is checking you out. It isn't fair. Why do you always get the beautiful ones?" One of the boys groaned. I blushed. I was checking a guy out. Wait, What? Did I just blush? Kill me! "I- I m seery, I debt mean to hat you." What did I just say? This couldn't get any worse. The boys looked shocked even the mute handsome boy looked a little bit surprised. Why did I keep calling him handsome? "I-I'm s-sorry I h-hit you, I d-didn't mean to," that sounded better. "Oh," one of the boys said. Oh! Indeed. I was expecting a reply, but the handsome boy in front of me refused to talk. Is he dumb or deaf? "I am Tom. And I am not dumb nor deaf," he said and walked away. I didn't say that aloud, did I? Guess I did. "You did, baby girl," one of the two boys said an. He waved at me dragging his smirking friend with him. That was embarrassing.

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