Fat Owl Reviews | Mann Mayal
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Last published Sun, May 1, 2016
My twisted take on the weekly Pakistani drama, Mann Mayal. 'Dekhiye Peer sabh, raat aath bajey.. sirf Hum par, *cue 'Hum jaisa koi nahin' voice-over*. Seriously though, watch it.. even if Mannu's silliness, Salahuddin's general backbone-less-ness, Meekail's marranjoga-ness and Ifti and Co.'s selfishness makes you want to pull your hair out.. it'll all be worth it in the end..
.. I think!
Bas that's just me.
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Ishqiya 2 (Continued)
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It has always been you!
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Kareena SS: Just Smile
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His sweet trouble
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''I want you out of my life! I don't want to fucking see you!'' His voice got louder. ''Then I'll do what you want!'' I stutter trying to walk away from him, but before I got to do that he pushes me against the wall again. He lifts my chin up and looks straight into my eyes. ''But my heart doesn't want the same thing.'' He says underneath his breath before he crashes his lips into mine. Matthew Bayaroads, 28, is one of the richest people in America. He has everything, Money, Cars, Houses and much more that people dream of having. Every woman wants to be with him and every man wants to be him. Nawal Hassan, 22, is a poor Muslim woman who lives in a small village, but that doesn't mean she can let people look down on her. She's a strong woman who always talks back when she sees or hears something wrong. Matthew finds Nawal interesting due to her behavior, he knows she's not like every other woman. Day by day he finds himself stuck on her as Nawal is stuck on him too, but the problem is their love for each other is unacceptable. He's Atheist and she's Muslim. *Ps: I wrote this story when I was like 14, and I'm 17 now so believe me. It may be cringe as fuck, but enjoy people (;* || HIGHEST RANK - #1 HIJABI ON 14/12/2019 || || HIGHEST RANK - #4 ASSISTANT ON 7/12/2019 || || HIGHEST RANK - #1 FORBIDDEN ON 22/2/2020 ||
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