Kissed By Death (PLZ READ DESCRIPTION)

PLZ COMMENT EVEN IF IT IS TO SAY I SUCK!! LOL I was debating on even publishing at all.. I'm new at this and I decided to give it a shot.. I know this really isn't a description but still as I said this is just like... a test run.. Im going to leave the intro and chapter 1 up for a month or two.. if i get enough comments then I will write more..