Murder Hall
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Last published Sat, Jun 4, 2016
I'm Mavi. I've lived with my best friend Hanna, her cat Ben and my dog Nels for quite a while. We live in an apartment together which has probably almost burned down give or take 19 times. We obviously can't cook shit. Anyways, that's not the point of this story. This story is talking about the murder hall. Hall of blood and sacrifice. No one knows too much about it. All we know is that there's a murderer in our school, leading innocent lives into the hall to breathe their last breath. No one knows who's it is. That's the purpose of this story. Track. Confront. Imprison.
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