When Things Go Wrong
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Last published Mon, Aug 1, 2016
Brook and Brent have been living peacefully with their mother all their lives. Their father was sent to prison 15 years ago for murder, but they were too young to remember. They don't even remember their father at all. They don't even know exactly what he did.
They just live normally, like any other family; going to school every day, keeping their grades up, going to sports practice and work after school, dating, hanging out with their friends, etc.
They have no idea their father is planning his escape and is coming after them for revenge. They have no idea he wants them dead.
But when he does finally escape and come for them, will they be ready? Can they stop him? Can they win the fight for their lives when their father will do whatever it takes to murder his ex-wife and children and anyone else who gets in his way?
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