Deja Vu My Love

This was my first ever attempt at writing a graphically detailed story. It was inspired by a discussion we had in class about domestic violence. It was meant to end with the death of all three main characters but that seemed lazy. I decided to try my hand at a suspense story so I went back to it a few days after it was originally written and made some edits, attempting to make it more suspenseful and the characters a little less flat.