The Almost Ghost *ON HOLD*

The Almost Ghost *ON HOLD*

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Chandler Harrow is in a coma. He knows it, because he's staring at himself hooked up to machines and IV fluid packs. And the only person who knows he's there is Rina Cassidy, a volunteer at the hospital where Chandler's body lies vacant. To get Chandler walking and talking again, they will have to put aside their differences and survive the musings of a perverted old man, a phony fortune teller, Rina's speculative family and the wrath of Dr. Lasko before Chandler is taken off of life support. Meanwhile, the pair is spending every minute with each other, and their relationship teeters between being sort-of-friends to something more. Can the something more last if Chandler wakes up?
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Special Agent Alyssa Caine has been tasked with the most important mission of her life: the assassination of the man who would bring about the end of the world. The only problem? He is already dead. A minor issue that is resolved in the year 2157 when a renegade group of scientists develops a device that allows to jump through time. They recruit the former special agent to send her back fifty years, to take just one man out of the equation, a minimal change with a predicted maximal effect on the fate of the world, and prevent a devastating war that has driven the last surviving humans to live in decrepit underground bunkers. Every action has a consequence. Alyssa is humanity's last hope, and her actions will determine the fate of the whole world. She is willing to sacrifice everything for a better future. But she soon realizes that the impact of her actions might be beyond her control, and beyond all predictions. _____ Highest Rankings: #16 in Science [06.02.2019] #36 in Dystopia [06.02.2019] #65 in FemaleProtagonist [01.02.2019] #71 in TimeTravel [06.02.2019] #1 in Paradox [28.02.2019] #1 in ONC2019 [01.02.2019] #3 in OpenNovellaContest2019 [28.02.2019] This is my entry for the ONC 2019! At first I thought I'd pick something a bit out of my comfort zone (so.... NOT SciFi for once...) to expand my horizon, but when I saw a prompt about time travel I was immediately inspired. Please keep in mind, all of this is WIP! The title, cover, and some of the content might change at any time... I have an outline and I worked hard to come up with a compelling and consistent story line, but due to the nature of the story (timey whimey stuff!) I might have to revise things a few times as I write. I'm grateful for any feedback and I hope you enjoy :)

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