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Ellie goes to Sam Allport School for Investigation. As an eighth grader, she's been sent on a mission to find the mysterious "eraser", who's been erasing events from time. But the eraser turns out to be someone unexpected. Soon she finds out more about the eraser, an evil society called the Keoluvents, and the people she thought she could trust... than she ever would have expected.
This is the novel I wrote in eighth grade (the first novel I ever finished; sad that that's exciting) and it's currently on its third draft. I need editing, so be harsh!
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