"The world around her swam with mottled light. How long had she been fighting?"
So...in sixth grade we took this computer-skills class. Our final test was to write a short story in Microsoft Word. My story ended up fleshing out into the trilogy I am working on and planning to publish at somepoint in my life, but I realized how incredible my writing skill has improved between just the two or three years. So, I decided to re-write the original sequence of a short story, same plot and characters, just with current skill. Comments and feedback are appreciated, please enjoy!
"Despite everything that happens, just keep smiling, because there's light at the end of the tunnel. If not, you make that light."
A girl whispered those words to herself, countless times, clinging to them like a promise. She never imagined how true they'd become. Beneath the world she thought she knew, one woven with spirits and people who could shapes it. A world hidden under her nose all along.
Now, that same girl walks among the gifted and the haunted, traveling beside the few she dares to call friends. Together, they move through chaos and wonder to save the one person who gives her reason to keep smiling, the one who keeps her light alive.