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Complete, First published Mar 23, 2016
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Hey guyzzz!!
i dnt knw its good or Bad bt i was jst thinking about the scene 4m somedays so thought 2 give it a try...sorry if do any mistakes...
this is my 1st try on OS... 
infact in writing also.. i m Reader only.. Confused

1month after Diwali Manik again get headache and fainted in his house..

Manik's Dad come to meet Manik after hearing the details of Manik's health 4m their family doctor..{as he is out of India bcoz of his work}    

Manik's Dad found him fainted n took him 2 the hospital

In college
Nandini come nd go straight 2 the Fab5's jam room as she is very worried becz Manik didn't pick her call 4m morning 

its been 4hr 4m morning so she tries Manik's home no
4m a servant she get 2 knw about Manik..
She rushes 2 the hospital..in the meantime.. on not finding MaNan
Dhrulya,Mukhti & Aryamaan Called Nandini nd got 2 knw about Manik..

when Nandini came 2 hospital ,she met Manik's doc nd got 2 knw that he is nw fine,so they discharge him..

She rushes 2 Manik's house nd straight 2 Manik's room..

Nandini become very much scared nd worried that she dnt even notices that Manik's Dad is sitting besides him..
She ran 2 Manik nd hugged him very tightly & said..

Nandini: tum thik toh hona Manik.. main kitna darr gayi thi tumhe pata hai,, tum kabhi bhi apna khayal nehi rakhte naa.. 
raat ko mujhe tumhe chor kar janahi nehi chahi tha.. I m sorry i m really very sorry Manik..nd she Again hugged Manik.. then break the Hug(Manik is trying hard 2 say her About his DAD bt Nandini is Nandini) 

then Nandini break the hug and give kisses on  his 4head
& cheeks.. AGAIN HUG HIM TIGHTLY..Nd Manik is shocked (till Manik's Dad is enjoying the scene)
then he come in his senses after a while,, 
Nd not getting hugged back by Manik ,,Nandini now understands that something is wrong...
so she Break the hug nd asked Manik what happen??

Manik: Dad,, (showing by his finger 2wards his Dad)

SCENE STILLS AT NANDINI'S SHOCKED FACE,,Wink
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"Dr.Manik Malhotra, home ministry of India reached Mumbai as his grand mother is not well. According to sources she had a paralysis stroke, admitted in a Parth neuron speciality hospital at Mumbai west. Now her condition is critical docter's are suggesting for surgery" This news is flashing in all national television channels Manik is at entrance of hospital, "Sir! All the best at last after 5 long years you are going to meet madam, give her this" a rose flower bouquet is offered to Manik by Ram a middle aged man dressed up in police dress. "Thank you But it's not that simple that after so many years I can just grab her and kiss senselessly and say sorry she is now not my little bunny she is strong independent single mother who is fighting with this world all alone from five long years, any way, I can't wait I am desperate" Manik spoke with a sparking smile in his eyes which is dam sexy Manik walked straight to operation theatre, all his family is present there, sadana hugged him, "Are you nervous?" "Yes sadana" "Are you sure she will forgive?" "She has no choice as I had no choice to leave her" "She is looking pale and strong, I am worried" "Don't worry she will come" "Being a mother I had to" "Sadana relax watch full size adult movie" "Shameless boy I am your mother" "Seriously I just want to grab her and "Stop Manik let her come out" They heard a sound of door opening a lady of 27 years wear a white coat instructing nurse is walking out of operation theatre, "How is she???" Every one present there rushed towards her and shouting questions "Daddi is fine operation went successfully, she will be shifted to her room in an hour, you can meet her one by one now please excuse me" she started to walk "Nandu! She will be fine na???" Sadana asked "Ma! She is obsalutely fine, don't worry" smiled Nandini took out her stethoscope from her shoulder and kept in her apron packet and raised her head got freezes for a moment "Manik" She wishpered in a negligible voice