The Tell-Tale Eye
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WINNER OF TWIST FATE CHALLENGE
Could be published soon.
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The Tell-Tale Heart, by Edgar Allan Poe, is twisted(even more than before) so that the narrator of the original story is the one with the 'evil eye'. Edgar Allan Poe was a great writer that I cannot dream to follow, so just enjoy this short story.
This is for the Twist Fate Challenge, so please, pretty please with a cherry on top, leave behind comments. Love you, readers!
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