Evil within me
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  • Reads 383
  • Votes 40
  • Parts 11
  • Time 54m
Ongoing, First published Mar 26, 2016
When a bunch of students went to their retreat, the leader sir Harold made an activity called under fears which means each kid in the retreat has to tell something in which they are afraid off... this was just supposed to be a funny and spook activity not knowing that a evil soul has been listening to them. Every student has their own fears and each of them got to fairly tell their fears. As the last student finish his story a very strong wind spook the kids which made then all scared, as sir Harold noticed that every kid was scared he decided to make them sleep so that they can get ready tomorrow.

As each kid wake up they find themselves stuck in a room needing to escape or they can die through their fears. As some others die while a lot survives in which thinking they were safe as they we're together but then as they figure out on how to escape they found out that there was a big fear that is connected to their fears...
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Who do you think survives? Who do you think dies? Find out as you read. And also in every chapter there is one fear about the student and in every chapter you will learn how they got to fear it. 

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This is a newly formed book I hope you like it and i really would appreciate it if you understand the corrections i make throughout the book its because im not really good at this im just interested in making books!
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