Ever Bedridden
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Last published Sat, Jul 6, 2013
This story is nothing special, its just a Creative Writing assignment I was given in my English Class.
This short story needed to include a conflict-In this case inner conflict- And can be, or not be resolved. The story is about a depressed teen who is considering suicide.
Please if you have the time, give me feedback on how I can improve my writing.
~Thanks
~~Connor Ward
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