The Forbidden Castle - Short Story
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"You honestly didn't know?" she laughs maliciously, "When you came here. I thought you would have been wanting to die! Or, at least be prepared to die" Die? No not die. Watch my sister die, then die myself. Know I couldn't protect her from this creature of the past! Know that there is no hope left. Now that is more accurate.
Jara is a witch. Araj, her brother. The two have always lived together, bound by their love for each other. When a simple game of tag goes awry, the pair are trapped by a being that shouldn't be alive. Jara's magic is useless and the two hope that they can survive with nothing but their wits and their love for each other. After all, no matter what kind of love it is. Whether it's lovers or brothers, family or friends, Love triumphs all....or does it?
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